There has been lots of changes to the script after several discussions. We decied that the first draft of the script included lots of things that were not nessiserly needed in the trailer. We wanted to change it so that the footage in the trailer would be the most important and would show the story without giving too much away.
This is the final script:
Location- Kitchen
This is the final script:
Location- Kitchen
*Matt on phone in kitchen*
Matt: Ok, ok I gotta go, bye.
*Hangs up phone as Shannon enters*
Matt: Ok, ok I gotta go, bye.
*Hangs up phone as Shannon enters*
*CUT*
Location- Bedroom
*Cut to Shannon finding paper*
Location: Top of stairs
*Both characters at the top of the stairs*
(Short clips of argument, including Matt reaching for baseball bat beside him)
*Matt hits Shannon with bat*
Location- Bedroom
*Cut to Shannon finding paper*
Location: Top of stairs
*Both characters at the top of the stairs*
(Short clips of argument, including Matt reaching for baseball bat beside him)
*Matt hits Shannon with bat*
*CUT to Shannon falling down stairs* (Camera angle shot from top of stairs)
*CUT to Matt digging (Long shot)
*CUT to Matt dropping Shannon (with cloth wrapped around)*
Location: House and Woods.
-Matt pulls car into drive
-Opens and enters front door
*CUT *
-Shannon's hand appearing to come out of the ground
-Bare feet moving on mud (with cloth around legs)*
*CUT*
-Matt turning off (bedroom) light
-Matt walks past mirror and sits on bed
(As above action happens, Shannon will walk past other side of bed but only been shown in the mirror not in main shot.
*CUT to Shannon stood over bed going to hit with the bat* (Towards camera as it blacks out)
*CUT to end title then fades into actors names and film company details*
*CUT to Matt digging (Long shot)
*CUT to Matt dropping Shannon (with cloth wrapped around)*
Location: House and Woods.
-Matt pulls car into drive
-Opens and enters front door
*CUT *
-Shannon's hand appearing to come out of the ground
-Bare feet moving on mud (with cloth around legs)*
*CUT*
-Matt turning off (bedroom) light
-Matt walks past mirror and sits on bed
(As above action happens, Shannon will walk past other side of bed but only been shown in the mirror not in main shot.
*CUT to Shannon stood over bed going to hit with the bat* (Towards camera as it blacks out)
*CUT to end title then fades into actors names and film company details*
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